God, haven't we all hit a sentence like that? Where we have to read it over and over again 50 times and by the time we get it "right" (ie. we're so frustrated we decide "good enough!") it sounds kind of awkward because the tone and speed and volume are all wrong.

and wow, I didn't realize how unarticulated my speech was until I started podficcing
Sometimes as I edit I marvel that anyone can understand a single word from my mouth. /o\