Hmm, now I'm quite curious about what you expected I would twig to that I did not.

And don't feel bad about the delay! I think everybody is sort of feeling their way through the correct way to formulate and structure a critique, and I understand wanting to work through your own ideas before seeing how critique was applied to you. (I really do appreciate that you did let me know once you did read it; I was having a niggling doubt that I'd been way too harsh.)